Peer Comments and My Respond to Annotation 3

Susie:
i think that it is good generally because you give us the evidence that how the media affect teenager on school bullying

Pearl:
i think you spend too much time on describing the context
maybe it can be shorter and it is also easy for readers catch the point
and it is good that you to mark first secondly...

Lisa:
because i think there are the attributions of causing the news to influence the teenagers. so u think my description is not concise enough?
if it is i'll revise it thank u

Pearl:
i still can know what you write
i means if you can do it
it can be better
because half of your annotation is other's thing

Lisa:
OK

Julia:
so will u come up with a solution? or u just want to discuss about the phenomenon?

Pearl:
it is not really like yours

Lisa:
next annotation i'll come up with a solution

Pearl:
yes yes the annotation is like only phenomenon. your next annotation can do something different