Reflection 2

    So far, I am gradually clear about what thesis I want to write and being able to find out the annotations which can support my discourse appropriately. I feel uplifted at this improvement, but I know that there is still room to progress my writing and thinking. As the teacher's advice, the solution of news literacy education mentioned in my annotation 4 should be more concrete to become more convincing. Likewise, my previous annotations also need revised in this way. As for my issue topic, I will rethink it and relate it to the relation between Taiwan's televised news violence and school bullying. Firstly, I would like to prove the influence of news violence on school bullying in the annotation 1, taking the annotation 2 and 3 for examples, and then make my annotation 4 for defending my argument to resolve the issue. To do my research paper efficiently and progressively, I make the working plan as follows:

Step 1: Review and Organize my previous compositions

Step 2: Read over teacher's handouts and Revise my previous compositions

Step 3: Integrate my compositions into the research paper and qualify it in APA Style

Step 4: Finish my research paper and review it

    With achieving four steps, I hope that my research paper can communicate not only with the readers but also with myself.